Brownian Emotion

Blame

Did I trample on your words

Or was the silence of your own volition?

Did I suck out all the oxygen

Or were you ignorant to your self asphyxiation?

Did I not listen to your suffering

Or did you repress it in to oblivion?

Did I not reach out with enough kindness

Or did your envy leave you blinded?

Was I too much to be loved

Or were you too small to love enough?

2 responses to “Blame”

  1. Abhishek Kumar Avatar
    Abhishek Kumar

    Your poem is a poignant exploration of the complexities of a relationship, where introspection and self-reflection are key. It delves into the intricate dance of emotions, communication, and the inner struggles that can affect connections with others. Well done. 📜💔🤔

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    1. Derecho Avatar
      Derecho

      Thank you Abhishek, that is a very lovely assessment.

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